As someone who love the warmth of the sun, the way it brightens my day and cheers me up, I find this a great poem!I hope Vi will always be creative and expressive.Way to go, Vi!
I can just feel the bouncy ride to the sun in Vi's boingy boingy. Good poem, Vi. I like that you take the time to look at your alley world and want to be a part of it.
I love how her practical side comes out when she writes about "a safety feature". It sounds like she has been taught well.
What a sweet poem, filled with lots of love and a sense of security about the world. Hugs to both of you! :-)
Love the boingy...boingy...boingy. Already using onomatopoeia at her age. Incredible.
I like that word boingy..good job ViMae:)
I love that word! Boing, boing. It reminds me of Saturday morning cartoons!Stay cozy.
I adore children's poetry... which is why I love working with little kids.
What a sweetheart .Her poem is amazing, and the thought connections prove she has a great eye for detail. Keep it up ViMae. :-)
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