Wednesday, February 27, 2013

Boingy boingy

a poem by Vi

When the sun comes up
and it's in our alley

I'm gonna grab it
and get a ride up.

I'll buy a trampoline
so when I come back down
I'll have a safety feature

And then I'll bounce back up.
Boingy, boingy, boingy.  


Anita said...

As someone who love the warmth of the sun, the way it brightens my day and cheers me up, I find this a great poem!

I hope Vi will always be creative and expressive.

Way to go, Vi!

Grandmother said...

I can just feel the bouncy ride to the sun in Vi's boingy boingy. Good poem, Vi. I like that you take the time to look at your alley world and want to be a part of it.

Ms Sparrow said...

I love how her practical side comes out when she writes about "a safety feature". It sounds like she has been taught well.

DJan said...

What a sweet poem, filled with lots of love and a sense of security about the world. Hugs to both of you! :-)

Stephen Hayes said...

Love the boingy...boingy...boingy. Already using onomatopoeia at her age. Incredible.

Far Side of Fifty said...

I like that word boingy..good job ViMae:)

Jenny said...

I love that word! Boing, boing. It reminds me of Saturday morning cartoons!

Stay cozy.

Paula Wooters said...

I adore children's poetry... which is why I love working with little kids.

Peaceful Warrior said...

What a sweetheart .
Her poem is amazing, and the thought connections prove she has a great eye for detail.
Keep it up ViMae. :-)


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