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The Princess Locked in the Tower
by ViolaMae
Once upon a time, there was a princess. Her name was Golden Rose. She was
afraid of stormtroopers. They tried to attack and catch her.
Because she was afraid, Golden Rose locked herself in the tower.
Because she was afraid, Golden Rose locked herself in the tower.
She didn't like being in the
tower, so she went to see Princess Leia. She thought Leia had a bow and arrow,
but she didn't. Princess Golden Rose put on some jewelry to disguise herself as
Smaug. The stormtroopers didn't know she was Rose. She went into the woods and
ate some zazzberries.
“Blarz.” said some aliens from
up above. They put handcuffs on her. But when she had gone to see Leia, Leia
had given her a blaster. So she blasted the handcuffs apart.
She called in the warriors, including Princess Leia, to help her fight off the aliens.
She called in the warriors, including Princess Leia, to help her fight off the aliens.
Vi's illustration: Rose and Sabrine |
Princess Golden Rose saw an alien getting ready to shoot a bomb.
"Duck!" she yelled. "Where?" asked her favorite giraffe,
Sabrine, looking around. Golden Rose ducked out of the way, but Sabrine got
shot right in the neck. He ran a little and then just fell over, and died.
["Isn't that sad, Mom?" Vi asked her mother when they read it
together. "That's the sad part."]
She ran over and put a leash on him and pulled him, but he stayed on the ground. Golden Rose and Leia chased the aliens away. "Blarz!" said the aliens as they ran.
She ran over and put a leash on him and pulled him, but he stayed on the ground. Golden Rose and Leia chased the aliens away. "Blarz!" said the aliens as they ran.
The end.
As her parents have noted, ViMae's story has it all: a plot with a climax in the middle, character
development, humor, and sadness. It
incorporates elements of Star Wars (Leia and the stormtroopers), the Hobbit
(Smaug the gold-encrusted dragon), our Dragonvale game
(zazzberries are dragon food), and other bits.
Its humor and sadness both come from an old birthday-card visual
joke Peter and I have shared with the kids. (Animals are riding in a car,
heading toward a tunnel with a low overhead…. The elephant warns, “Duck!” but
the giraffe, misunderstanding, stretches his neck upward and asks, “Where?”) The four of us share this running gag often, and the kids seem pleased that it's a kind of "inside humor."
ViMae took all those elements and made up her own princess
story…and happily, this princess is proactive. Golden Rose locked herself in the tower for protection, disguised herself to hide from
the stormtroopers, went to Leia for a weapon, and together with Leia dispatched the aliens. That’s a princess story I can support!